1 files changed, 16 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/help/C/bookmark-add.page b/help/C/bookmark-add.page
index 2db3e566d..a4301f90b 100644
--- a/help/C/bookmark-add.page
+++ b/help/C/bookmark-add.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#start"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="bookmark"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-05-03" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9" version="0.1" date="2013-05-07" status="draft"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
@@ -26,7 +26,8 @@
 
   <title>Bookmark a page</title>
 
-  <p>Bookmarking a page saves it in the <app>Web</app> history.</p>
+  <p>Bookmarking a page stores it in the <app>Web</app> history, and saves you
+  the hassle of remembering sites that you want to visit again.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <title>To add a bookmark:</title>
@@ -38,8 +39,7 @@
       <guiseq><gui style="menu"><link xref="super-menu">Super menu</link></gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Bookmarks</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Add Bookmark…</gui></guiseq> or
-      you can also press
-      <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>D</key></keyseq> to add a bookmark.</p>
+      press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>D</key></keyseq> to add a bookmark.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Type a title for your bookmark in the <gui>Title</gui> text
@@ -50,20 +50,24 @@
       list of topics. If the topic of your choice does not exist, type in the
       name of the topic in the <gui>Topic</gui> text box, and select
       <gui style="group">Create Topic <input>"Topic name"</input></gui> from
-      the list. You can also use the <gui>Topic</gui> text box to
-      search for existing topics if your current list of topics is very
-      long.</p>
+      the list.</p>
+      <note style="tip">
+	<p>You can also use the <gui>Topic</gui> text box to search for
+	existing topics if your current list of topics is very long.</p>
+      </note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui style="button">Add</gui> to add your bookmark, or
       <gui style="button">Cancel</gui> if you do not want to add the
       bookmark.</p>
       <note style="info">
-        <p>The <gui style="button">Similar</gui> button displays the number
-	of existing bookmarks for the website you are trying to remember. If
-	there is at least one existing bookmark, you can click the
-	<gui style="button">Similar</gui> button and select one of the
-	bookmarks in the list to view its properties.</p>
+        <p>The <gui style="button">Similar</gui> button displays the number of
+	existing bookmarks for the website you are trying to remember. If there
+	is at least one existing bookmark, the
+	<gui style="button">Similar</gui> button becomes clickable.
+	You can then click it to check the list of similar bookmarks.
+	You can further select any of the similar bookmarks from the list
+	to view their properties.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
   </steps>