From 6ebd82d7a9adb206b42f72e39f4c04947bc0e899 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Hill <mdhill@gnome.org>
Date: Sat, 6 Jul 2013 11:33:05 -0400
Subject: Review bookmark edit

---
 help/C/bookmark-edit.page | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/bookmark-edit.page b/help/C/bookmark-edit.page
index afce9f739..c3359962f 100644
--- a/help/C/bookmark-edit.page
+++ b/help/C/bookmark-edit.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#bookmark"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="bookmark"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-07-01" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
@@ -38,21 +38,21 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>From the <gui>Topics</gui> list on the left side, select the topic
-      that your bookmark is classified under.</p>
+      that contains your bookmark.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>A list of bookmarks in the selected <gui>Topic</gui> will be shown on
+      <p>A list of bookmarks in the selected topic will be shown on
       the right side of the window. Select the bookmarks that you wish to
       update, then select
       <guiseq><gui style="menu">File</gui><gui style="menuitem">Properties</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>You can now update the bookmark title, URL and the topics that it is
-      listed under.</p>
+      <p>You can now update the bookmark title, its URL and the topics that
+      contain it.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-	<p>If you only want to rename a bookmark, right click on it and select
+	<p>If you only want to rename a bookmark, right click on it, select
   <gui style="menuitem">Rename…</gui> and type in the new name for your
   bookmark.</p>
 
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